This is the original Cut that was made of our film, half way through the editing process. Several strengths and weaknesses of the opening arise from. Strengths include: shot composition, lighting and mise en scene. but weaknesses, mainly comprising the edit, include: confusing narrative, short length (below 1 minute minimum time frame), rushed shots, lack of soundtrack and titles and unnecessary action. These issues would fairly easy to resolve if time consuming as I feel it would need an entirely new edit in order to play on its strengths without further accentuating it's weaknesses.In addition, a list of possible, copy-write free soundtracks would need to be compiled and title font would need to be explored.
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