A strong analysis in that it is concise, strongly linked to evidence whilst reflecting excellent understanding of thriller conventions.
In future posts avoide..."typical of the genre".
Instead something like "this is an example of how the director establishes and develops the thriller conventions."
To strengthen and place firmly in Level 4 you could add another slide where you reference real thrillers (Inte textuality) that use similar shots and conventions. This would also add to your "research aspect of your portfolio.
An example would be when you say cars are an aspect of the thriller convention ...add because they are claustrophobic and one can't escape from a moving car. Then add a thriller which has an impressive scene in a car...if you've seen "Pulp Fiction" the clip where the black guy gets shot in the car by mistake!!
A strong analysis in that it is concise, strongly linked to evidence whilst reflecting excellent understanding of thriller conventions.
ReplyDeleteIn future posts avoide..."typical of the genre".
Instead something like "this is an example of how the director establishes and develops the thriller conventions."
To strengthen and place firmly in Level 4 you could add another slide where you reference real thrillers (Inte textuality) that use similar shots and conventions. This would also add to your "research aspect of your portfolio.
An example would be when you say cars are an aspect of the thriller convention ...add because they are claustrophobic and one can't escape from a moving car. Then add a thriller which has an impressive scene in a car...if you've seen "Pulp Fiction" the clip where the black guy gets shot in the car by mistake!!